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Leonora posted:
antabanta posted:
Sample. Feel free to critique.
"Camoudie! Snake! Camoudie!"
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The story makes the readers who witnessed these events remember everything; it was very serious and scary. The ending with everyone feasting on curried goat, and the last humorous paragraph add a perfect balance to the seriousness.

Thank you very much. Although I appreciate the positive comments, I am grateful for critique. Anyone sees anything that could be improved upon, please feel free to offer it.

6/1/192:52 PM

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